RLM Editorial

Dedicated to meeting your writing needs ​​​​​

​ Packages: 

​​​​ Picture book/Chapter book tips: This rate is $29.  You will receive a letter that helps with both   developing character and plot and gives a suggestion for the pitch.

 Picture book critique:  My rate is $39 per manuscript.  You will receive a letter with overall impressions of   the work and suggestions for improvement.  Picture book texts should not rely on art notes.

 Chapter book critique: My rate is $59 per manuscript.  You will receive a letter with overall impressions of   each chapter and suggestions for improvement.    

 Editing:  You will receive detailed comments and line-editing manuscript notes as well as advice on making   the manuscript marketable.  My rate for this service is $89 per manuscript.  This fee may vary, depending on   the length of the manuscript. 

 Consulting: For a manuscript critique and help with a query letter, publisher or agent advice, resources, and   comments on where a manuscript fits in the market, I charge $125 per hour.  

To better serve you, please include the following information along with a short cover letter to Rlrmrvos@gmail.com

The title

The book description or pitch

The main character's want

The obstacle(s) that get in the way of the want

What's at stake

Payment:  Credit cards or payment through PayPal are accepted.  Or, send a check addressed to Randi Lynn Mrvos, 4637 Spring Creek Drive, Lexington, KY  40515.



Randi Mrvos is the very best at the craft of writing! She has inspired, motivated and taught me to write and edit my stories to reach success in publishing. 

 G. Smith, teacher, writer and councilman

 Randi has been a tremendous mentor to me.

—  R. Montana, retired teacher, writer, and promotion manager of Kid's Imagination Train e-zine

 Randi is a remarkable editor. Her experience helped me make revisions enjoyable. 

—  L. Fleming, retired teacher and writer

 I have worked professionally with Randi Lynn Mrvos for about the past seven years as a writing colleague.  As editor of Kid's Imagination Train ezine, she gave me supportive and expert guidance on my writing projects.

— S. Blumberg, retired school teacher, writer and voiceover artist

Randi is an excellent editor. Her editorial skills have helped me achieve success on many writing projects — G. Belleranti, author and retired school librarian

 From publishing two stories in Kid's Imagination Train ezine, I've been listed in the SCBWI's PAL listing (Published and Listed).  Every bit of publishing helps, thanks to the editor, Randi Lynn Mrvos

— P. Wentling, writer and poet

 Direct, gently delivered feedback targeted to your specific writing, from a vast storehouse of knowledge. 

— A. Amit, author and book reviewer

 Randi's efficient and astute editing has been a valuable service to me in the improvement of my writing skills. — J. Cornebise, teacher, writer, illustrator

​ Randi Lynn Mrvos has helped me to focus on my writing by giving me useful feedback and suggestions. Her attention to detail has helped to elevate the quality of my poems and stories.  

T. Lugo, writer 

​​​​​​​​​​​Randi Lynn Mrvos​​​​​

      Kentucky author Randi Lynn Mrvos invites you to sit a spell, take your shoes off, read, laugh, and get inspired.​​